My Opinion of “What Teachers Make”

My opinion on the YouTube video entitled “What Teachers Make” by Taylor Mali, is that teachers do make a difference in their students’ lives. “I make kids work harder than what they think they could,” said Taylor Mali, “I make parents see who their children are and what they can be.” Though the efforts of many teachers, a lot of students got a chance to fulfill their dreams of becoming lawyers, doctors, and business men. They taught them how to be assiduous with their work, showed them how the effort put in the process is nearly as important as the product, and many other life-changing skills. Our teachers had made an tremendous impact in our live. They have changed our lives.

An instuction for life

Take into account that great achievements always involve great risk. Like the great race horse Secretariat, his owner Penny Tweedy had risked everything in order for it to be successful. She risked her family’s future, all of her money, and her good reputation. But thanks to Penny Tweedy’s huge effort and determination, Secretariat became the first U.S. horse in history that won the tripe crown. If Penny Tweedy did not have this great risk, her achievements would not had been so great. In conclusion, the greater your risk is, the greater your achievements will be. But please also remember, that greater your risk is, the more likely you are going to fail. Please think carefully before you make decision of taking the risk.

About me

Hi there!

My name is Amy, and I am a high school student studying at Alameda High School. I am 15 years old , and I like to paint, draw, and write in my spare time. (So that’s why I’m here writing! ) My family and friends are the template of my life. They had done so much for me, I highly appreciated their time and words of encouragement. I can’t imagine how horrible my life will turn out to be without them. This year, I had just competed my freshmen year in high school with a perfect GPA 4.0. My goal is to achieve a higher GPA in my coming sophomore year. That’s why I’m working hard right now this summer to improve my writing skills !